Our Dance
Dance of wind and rain evolvesas I feel trapped within these wallsRain of life pouring down...its' wetness lapped up by the groundLightning flashes all around..like strokes of love the thunder...
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Raven - G'day - Love the use of one of my favourite pastimes for weatherly / emotive expression. I must say that I can relate very much to the last part. A good READ.
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Ahh yesthere is something aboutthe rain and a good stormto cleanse that souland bring the world backBeautiful!"On the surface simplicitySwirling black lilies totally ripeBut the darkest pit in meIt's...
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I guess some things just never change a good read, raven ... very you ... nice!
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Raven, Whew! This poem bursts of passion like an antidote to cabin fever. Thespianna
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Hey, Raven! Nice to see you again! This mirrors the storm that hit us at about two o'clock this morning...thick summer heat giving way to strobing lightning and tremendously loud thunder...and then...
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Such a very powerful read, - Our Dance,showing your awesome talent, not by chance.That Crazy Royal Bird has done it again,I'm sitting here with my smirky grin.Awed by your writing Raven, once more,and...
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ipowell, G'day to you.. thanks so much for your wonderful reply.. LLP, Yes there is....I love the rain!...thank you my friend.. Davie, You only live once my friend..dare to enjoy life to its fullest!!...
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....is there anything on earth more primal and sensual than rain on bared flesh? Excellent, piece!!GaladrielThis is my simple religion. There is no need for temples; no need for...
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